[mcclim-devel] Guided Tour of CLIM

[Christophe Rhodes]

Christophe Rhodes <csr21 at cam.ac.uk> writes:

> Clemens Fruhwirth <clemens at endorphin.org> writes:
>
>> Here is my draft of an update to CLIM tutorial.
> I've read it through, and from this first pass have a list of small
> typos, stylistic changes and the like that I'd like to suggest.  I
> would have sent a diff with the changes, but unfortunately the current
> source is one-line-per-paragraph, which would make the diff extremely
> noisy and unclear.  Would it be possible to insert line breaks in the
> source?

Find attached a diff against the linebroken version in
Doc/Guided-Tour.  These changes are suggestions -- where I've picked
up on something, it may be that you can think of a better way to
express it than I have.

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Cheers,

Christophe