[mcclim-devel] patches to guided-tour subsection "A Simple drawing application"

[rpgoldman at real-time.com]

Again, mostly just tweaking grammar and spelling.  There are two
points below (marked with my initials), however, that seem like they
could use some further clarification.  I was concerned that I didn't
understand McCLIM well enough to provide the clarification.  If anyone
out there can provide the clarification, but doesn't want to dicker
with the text, drop me a line, or find me on #lisp, and I'll write the
text.

As usual, if I don't hear a squawk in a couple of days, I'll commit
the change.

best,
R

P.S. are these patch files really helpful for the text?  In
particular, is it useful to have my notes on places where we need
clarification from their contexts untimely ripp'd?  If I provide a
comment saying that a paragraph could use amplification, and you see
that in a patch file w/o context, is that at all useful to anyone?

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