[cdr-discuss] CDR 5
Nick Levine
ndl at ravenbrook.com
Sat Mar 1 08:55:20 UTC 2008
Marco,
Minor points:
1. I found the title of this CDR uninformative. Would you consider
replacing the word "extra" with "sub-interval"?
2. Minor typo (missing word) in 2nd para of introduction: "a brief
discussion pertaining TO the rationale..."
3. I'm not comfortable with the abbreviations in section 3 - as you
say it's not like CL has a tradition of abbreviating like this.
- nick
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